Please tell me what you think of my new book.?

good imagery, ur writing is good just make sure u stay away from cliches, its setting up good, also like the other person said dont go w summer dreams but take one sentence or quote from the book and make it into the title, one that is a good undertone, ties the story together, or describes it-- like in james freys a million little peices- catchy title, described the book well, and also was a line from the book---- i have something from my manuscript here also, can u check it out for me